Some slight Improvements We Can Make

I didn't want to come off harshly on anyone or put anyone in the spotlight, so I figured I'd address the topic with everyone. In efforts to improve our writing styles and to give us more connections to our characters while we write, I'd like to see use a little bit more description when we're typing out our actions. For example, when your character is speaking, make sure to note in what tone your character is speaking and what kind of emotion he may be displaying. Not all dialogue needs a bunch of description, but it’s nice to add some flavor. Be sure to use more descriptive narratives for your actions as well. Try to explain where you're looking, moving, or planning to do as if you were writing for a character out of a novel. Along the lines of writing out of a novel, be mindful of punctuation and grammar.

Everything is going well in the game, I just wanted to touch on some things that I’d like to see that would improve the game even better. Let me know if you have any questions or if there is anything that I can do to help.